Diagnostic Tools

Focused AI Feedback for Scripts

In addition to my full-service feedback, I’ve developed a suite of low-cost diagnostic tools.

AI is wildly effective in many ways but still struggles to grasp the intangible X factors that make or break scripts. That’s why standard AI feedback without significant human oversight is often disappointing.

My diagnostic tools are different.

I’ve designed each to be laser-focused on a single task AI already does well on its own.

Because these tools require minimal human supervision, I can offer them at a very low cost to you – the same low price for all types of scripts (from short pilots to full-length features).

As is the case with all my AI services, these diagnostic tools reside in a secure business workspace where submissions are kept confidential and not used for AI training.

Opening evaluator

$20

Do your script’s opening pages create enough clarity, momentum and promise to make a cold industry reader keep reading? Find out.

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Pace Booster

$20

Identifies scenes that may not be advancing plot, character or momentum — scenes you may be able to cut, combine or tighten without hurting the story.

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Clarity Tester

$20

Flags moments where a reader might be confused: Who is where? What just happened? Who is this character again?

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Plot Hole spotter

$20

Uncover logical hiccups, contradictions, continuity problems, character knowledge issues and cause-and-effect gaps.

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one last pass

$20

Finds five small, high-confidence fixes that will improve the read before your script goes out.

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all 5 diagnostics

$75

All 5 tools, each doing something very specific, add up to a lot of helpful feedback for a very low price.

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Confidentiality and Ownership

I will treat your screenplay and all submitted material as private. I will not share them with other clients, readers or third parties. I will not seek credit, ownership or additional compensation in connection with your submission. All rights to your work remain yours.