I provide clear, actionable feedback, informed by real-world experience and professional judgment, enhanced by advanced AI analysis:
Half hour pilot
$100
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A breakdown of your series engine and long-term viability
* At least 3 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
One Hour pilot
$120
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A breakdown of your series engine and long-term viability
* At least 4 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
Feature film script
$140
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A practical assessment of your script’s budget and producibility
* At least 5 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
Your Script and my AI-Assisted Feedback
Your screenplay is treated as confidential and used solely to generate feedback. Submissions are processed within a secure business workspace where content is not used to train AI models. Your work is not shared, distributed or made available to other users.
I use AI as a tool to support my analysis, not replace my judgment. That means I will personally review your submission to ensure your notes are clear and helpful. I’ve earned a Certificate in Artificial Intelligence from the University of Maryland, and I’m a signatory to the Creators Coalition on A.I.
LOW-COST DIAGNOSTIC TOOLS
Focused AI Feedback for Scripts
In addition to my full-service feedback, I’ve developed a suite of low-cost diagnostic tools.
AI is wildly effective in many ways but still struggles to grasp the intangible X factors that make or break scripts. That’s why standard AI feedback without significant human oversight is often disappointing.
My diagnostic tools are different.
I’ve designed each to be laser-focused on a single task AI already does well on its own.
Because these tools require minimal human supervision, I can offer them at a very low cost to you – the same low price for all types of scripts (from short pilots to full-length features).
As is the case with all my AI services, these diagnostic tools reside in a secure business workspace where submissions are kept confidential and not used for AI training.
Opening evaluator
$20
Do your script’s opening pages create enough clarity, momentum and promise to make a cold industry reader keep reading? Find out.
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Pace Booster
$20
Identifies scenes that may not be advancing plot, character or momentum — scenes you may be able to cut, combine or tighten without hurting the story.
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Clarity Tester
$20
Flags moments where a reader might be confused: Who is where? What just happened? Who is this character again?
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Plot Hole spotter
$20
Uncover logical hiccups, contradictions, continuity problems, character knowledge issues and cause-and-effect gaps.
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one last pass
$20
Finds five small, high-confidence fixes that will improve the read before your script goes out.
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all 5 diagnostics
$75
All 5 tools, each doing something very specific, add up to a lot of helpful feedback for a very low price.
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But what if I hate AI and wish it would die?
First off, I strongly suggest you reconsider. That said, I still offer my traditional services, no AI whatsoever, just me. It has to be a bit more expensive because it takes more of my time, but if that’s the way you want to roll, I’m here for you.
Half hour pilot NO AI
$150
What you’ll get:
* At least 3 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
*Plus line/page-specific comments where appropriate.
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
One Hour pilot NO AI
$175
What you’ll get:
* At least 4 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
*Plus line/page-specific comments where appropriate.
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
Feature script NO AI
$225
What you’ll get:
* At least 5 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
*Plus line/page-specific comments where appropriate.
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit