I provide clear, actionable feedback, informed by real-world experience and professional judgment, enhanced by advanced AI analysis:
Half hour pilot
$100
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A breakdown of your series engine and long-term viability
* At least 3 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
One Hour pilot
$120
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A breakdown of your series engine and long-term viability
* At least 4 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
Feature film script
$140
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A practical assessment of your script’s budget and producibility
* At least 5 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
Your Script and my AI-assisted Feedback:
Your Script Is Confidential. Your screenplay and all submitted materials remain completely private. Your work will never be shared, distributed or used for AI training. All scripts are reviewed solely for the purpose of providing feedback. I will seek no credit or additional payment for any notes I provide in connection with your submission.
AI is here to stay, and I intend to use it responsibly and transparently. That includes personally reviewing your submission, applying my human expertise and ensuring your notes are of the highest quality. I’ve earned a Certificate in Artificial Intelligence from the University of Maryland, and I’m a signatory to the Creators Coalition on A.I.
But what if I hate AI and wish it would die?
First off, I recommend that you reconsider. That said, I still offer my traditional services — no AI whatsoever, just me. It has to be a bit more expensive because it takes more of my time. But if that’s the way you want to roll, I’m here for you.
Half hour pilot No AI
$125
* At least 3 pages of notes on:
— Premise
— Series Engine
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
* Plus scene/line-specific comments where appropriate
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
One hour pilot No AI
$150
* At least 4 pages of notes on:
— Premise
— Series Engine
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
* Plus scene/line-specific comments where appropriate
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
Feature script no AI
$200
* At least 5 pages of notes on:
— Premise
— Commercial Potential
— Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
* Plus scene/line-specific comments where appropriate
You can pay securely with PayPal, Venmo, Apple Pay, Credit or Debit
With Respect to all of my Services:
- I don’t tick boxes on a formulaic cover sheet.
- I don’t waste time summarizing your script for you. You know what it’s about.
- I don’t say PASS or CONSIDER or RECOMMEND.
- I do always tell you what I like.
- I will let you know if an element just doesn’t work for me.
- But I always do it in a supportive and respectful way.
- I respect writers. I AM a writer.