Clear, constructive, actionable feedback on your entire script.
Half hour pilot
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A breakdown of your series engine and long-term viability
* At least 3 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
One Hour pilot
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A breakdown of your series engine and long-term viability
* At least 4 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Pilot Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
Feature film script
What you’ll get:
* A clear, compelling logline
* A focused genre and market positioning overview
* A practical assessment of your script’s budget and producibility
* At least 5 pages of detailed notes covering:
— Premise
— Plot and Subplots
— Characters
— Tone
— Dialogue
— Narrative Voice
— Pacing
Your Script and my AI-Assisted Feedback
Your screenplay is treated as confidential and used solely to generate feedback. Submissions are processed within a secure business workspace where content is not used to train AI models. Your work is not shared, distributed or made available to other users.
I use AI as a tool to support my analysis, not replace my judgment. That means I will personally review your submission to ensure your notes are clear and helpful. I’ve earned a Certificate in Artificial Intelligence from the University of Maryland, and I’m a signatory to the Creators Coalition on A.I.
But what if I hate AI and wish it would die?
First off, I strongly suggest you reconsider. That said, I still offer my traditional services, no AI whatsoever, just me. It has to be a bit more expensive because it takes more of my time, but if that’s the way you want to roll, I’m here for you.
